Poochhte HaiN Woh K GHalib Kaun Hai?



Jaur se  baaz aaye  par baaz  aayaiN  kya ?
Kehte haiN, ham tumko muNh dikhlayaiN kya ?

Raat din  gardish  meiN haiN  saat aasmaaN
Ho rahega kuchch-na-kuchch ghabraayaiN kya ?

Laag  ho  to   usko  ham   samjhaiN   lagaav
Jab na ho kuchch bhee, to dhoka khayaiN kya ?

Ho  liye   kyuN   naamaabar  ke  saath-saath ?
Yaar! apne KHat ko ham pahuNchaayaiN kya ?

Mauj-E-KHooN sar se guzar hee kyuN na jaaye
Aastaan-E-yaar    se    uTh   jaayaiN   kya ?

Umr  bhar dekhaa  kiye marne kee raah
Mar gaye par dekhiye dikhlaayaiN kya ?

Poochchte haiN woh K ‘GHalib’ kaun hai ?
Koee  batlaao   K  ham  batlaayaiN  kya ?


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11 thoughts on “Poochhte HaiN Woh K GHalib Kaun Hai?

  1. puchte hain wo k ghalab kon hia koi btlaye k hum batlain kya agar is shaar ki tashree behtreen c mumkin hai to plzzzzzzzzzzz give me through mail

  2. Mujeer Päshä Sähèb,
    Now both d lines have 10 syllables & r equally balanced.
    If a change according 2 u is incorporated, it’ll result in 11 syllables, 4 d 2nd line, thus disrupting d balance!

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